Power in Carrie
: In her book, Writing Fiction, Janet Burroway describes the power struggle that makes for good conflict: ". . . the pattern of the story's complications will be achieved by shifting the power back and forth from one antagonist to another."The shifting of power can be seen in the scene between Ewen High School principal Henry Grayle and high-powered lawyer John Hargensen. Hargensen is coming to meet Grayle about Desjardin's harsh punishment of his daughter for the shower incident. Before Hargensen even arrives, he already seems to hold power over the principal, who sits in his office bending paper clips. Grayle makes a weak power volley by pleaing to the lawyer's concern for "the workings of justice," but Hargensen regains ground by dismissing that and cutting to the chase, saying he was there because his daughter was "manhandled" and "verbally abused." Grayle makes another attempt, saying Desjardin was "reprimanded." This doesn't work. Hargensen wants more than a reprimand. Grayle then attempts to use law against the lawyer, citing a court case that gives the school title to in loco parentis. No dice. Hargensen cites another case against a school district (Grayle knows the principal - who is now selling insurance). But Hargensen overplays his hand, and says, "When I'm done with you, you'll be lucky to get a job selling encyclopedias door to door." This angers Grayle, and he reveals he's not just a "stuffed shirt": "Let it be court then," Grayle said. From this line on, Grayle holds the power, threating a counter-suit against Hargensens's daughter.
Characterization: When Hargensen leaves, it is a portrait of lost power. Hargensen crossed the room stiffly, paused as if to add something, then left, barely restraining himself the satisfaction of a hard doorslam. (67 - 74)
Exercise: Find a passage where there is conflict between two characters. Does the power switch back and forth?
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